This is beautiful. I also like the ues of words and the repeating schemes.

i love writing villanelles, you did an extremely good job with this one. full of a lot of painful truths

assignments yes well

you've got a great notion here, but
i think the imposed architecute is a
straightjacket, although you did
quite nicely within the confines of
your prison. and actually i kinda
think the moral of 'until the end'
ought to apply to the last piece
of yours that i reviewed...ai, life
is short and passing strange...we are
indesructable souls bound within
easily bruised flesh, and the clock
is ticking.

Whoa, I guess I've been off fictionpress for longer than I thought. When did they change the submit review from the dropdown to a button? Anyway.

I really like this. It's got fantastic structure, which is rarely seen, like, ever. Hahah. Um.. The rhyme is great, it doesn't sound forced or anything. :)