I like a lot this story. I find it very interesting how you show how peole see!
I'll imagine that nicholas must go to the collective because his eyes are blue , no?

I'll wait with impatience the next chapter!

I wish I suddenly got blues eyes...though I could do without the crazy magic splitting my head lol. This one was a bit slow, but it still add fuel to the fire of this story! Great job as always!

Wow...intense chapter here, especially about the Collective! Very scary and suspenseful!

Wow...this was really good! Very suspenseful, since I know, what with your writing style, that the next one will be amazing!

love the story so far. really interesting. keep up the good work

Very good chapter! luv ur characters so much!

awesome chapter! i like how ur toying with the relationshio between Stephen and Nicholas, keeps the reader guessing whats gonna happen next!