Whats next, whats next?

This story gets more into the magic and what that's about than the other ones in this series, and I think that's pretty cool. Please do continue!

(I would've reviewed more, but I was reading on a mobile device, which doesn't really make it easy to do that... Sorry.)

I love your story !

OH NOSES. THERE IS NO MORE TO READ!

Sadface.

I am totally in love with the Anomaly Chronicles arc it isn't even funny. You were able to write shorter stories and be able to combine them into a larger collective, with new characters as well as cameos and major parts played by past ones. You can write each story differently and still be able to call it a part of a whole. That is so completely awesome and makes the writer in me so jealous that I should have popped and shot green goo everywhere.

But enough semantics gushing, now for storiness.

I am in love with Matthew. Like. As soon as you described him taking care of Nicholas after his episode it made me puff up like a loon. Matt has a character type that I always try to create in stories and always kinda end up failing. They just support others without really knowing what they are holding up, but that doesn't really matter to them. They are just so happy with what they can do, it take them a lot to ask for more. I must admit that I am a little leery of Stephens sudden (it seems) interest in Nicholas.

(have I said how happy I am that you call him Nicholas and don't shorten it? lovelovelove it when authors choose to do that)

It almost seems like he didn't really notice Nicholas all that much, and now something happened that allows him to see him in a new light? Like he just learned something juicy and is now just paying attention?

I keep thinking about this Anchor thing, and I really really want it to be a person. Like Nicholas has to attach himself to a person so he doesn't go insane or lose himself to the visions. And I might be secretly hoping that it might be Stephen, but at the same time I hope not.

Because Matthew is my ultimate favorite and I want him and Nicholas to have babies and move to Vermont and raise llamas together. Or something equally disgustingly domestic-y.

I can't wait until you give a shot at any of these gems that you have sitting on this account. Though I totally understand that life comes before writing (and if it is also because you are too busy writing things for lessthanthree that I will totally squeal like a small creature getting stepped on). But when the day comes that my inbox tells me that something really exciting and awesome got posted I shall throw my arms in the air and totally drop everything I am doing to read it.

(note, I will most likely hurt myself with my flailing but will take it like a man and continue reading despite what may have happened)

Hugs and Kisses,

Shiri

Agh! Where's the end? I'm really enjoying this as I do all your stories, but the suspense is a downer

I like a lot this story. I find it very interesting how you show how peole see!

I'll imagine that nicholas must go to the collective because his eyes are blue , no?

I'll wait with impatience the next chapter!

I wish I suddenly got blues eyes...though I could do without the crazy magic splitting my head lol. This one was a bit slow, but it still add fuel to the fire of this story! Great job as always!

Wow...intense chapter here, especially about the Collective! Very scary and suspenseful!

Wow...this was really good! Very suspenseful, since I know, what with your writing style, that the next one will be amazing!

love the story so far. really interesting. keep up the good work

Very good chapter! luv ur characters so much!

awesome chapter! i like how ur toying with the relationshio between Stephen and Nicholas, keeps the reader guessing whats gonna happen next!