|Reviews for Bet You Can't!|
| SnoQueen 11/10/09 . chapter 15
Stupid net...wrote you a really good review...but my net just picked the right time to disconnect...whoever invented the internet is a genius and an idiot at the same time...UNLESS YOU INVENTED IT...THEN ITS TOTALLY OKAY...XD
ANYWAY...it took me a while to read this...with late nights and what-not...BUT IT WAS TOTALLY WORTH IT!
I regret putting reading this off until the last moment...it was so good!
Although...the ending...there was something missing...I'm not sure what it is...but I think maybe you need something like a 'Five years later' sequence or something...I don't know...
But you're the author...and you can tweak it the way you want...and I, as your humble, dedicated fan, shall only comply...:P
Written extremely well, and I can't believe how well DTIA fit into it! Two perfect puzzle pieces fitting together! Well done!
Keep it up - eagerly waiting for your next installment!
P.S The original review was SO much better...sorry this one sucks...
| shortwinters219 11/9/09 . chapter 1
lol i like the grade 9 and 10 dares
| fatbird33 11/7/09 . chapter 15
"And she was the one crying as she dressed and realized one thing - he had not said those words back to her. He did not love her." such a sad line, but well written:)
haha, i shall throw my sunglasses at you! haha, but not really. i think that this story could use like maybe one more chapter to kinda like close it up, you know what i mean?
but i still love it and i still love you.
i'll be eagerlly (sp?) awaiting a new story!
| fatbird33 11/7/09 . chapter 14
wow. i am so sorry that i haven't reviewed in FOREVER! college has taken over my life for sure. but i've discoveed some free time. yay! so i'm gonna finish your story (omg, finish. it's almost over. so sad:()
oh my gawd, her gown sounds perfect!
aw chad's vows were so cute!
"all hell broke loose.
In a good way.
" very nice
yay! hand grabbage! :D
yay! they're dating! :D
| dramaqueen89 10/25/09 . chapter 15
I am LOVING Nick and Kyrian :)
Especially since they're names of one of my favorite vamp series, Dark-Hunters :
This story is much better than DTIA coz the characters are more developed and has more depth.
I felt that DTIA was too.. rushed or shallow.
Anyway, keep up the good work!
Update soon :)
| Qatariyah 10/21/09 . chapter 15
Okay so I read Devil take it- the re-write, and now this...I left you a review on Nessa's story. About this though...what's next for KyTanya?
is there going to be a story on Thane Allison?
You didn;t mention Leslie's marriage in devil take it- re-write? I learned about it in the wedding scene on bet you can't
all the best...read from you soon :P
| Ardendale 10/21/09 . chapter 15
I love your story. So much. So very much. It's really good, and Kyrian actually reminds me a lot of my best friend/ex boyfriend/kinda current boyfriend who has (amazingly) just moved away. I love it. Keep writing! Please update!
| mylifeismine 10/12/09 . chapter 15
i love it, you hafta update soon!
| esssjay 10/3/09 . chapter 15
i read devil take it all first, and then turned to this story. i followed it AGES ago so i can't even remember if i reviewed. first up i guess i should say sorry if i didn't..back then i was a bit more of a silent reader.
anyway, SO glad you finally decided to update this story. i swear i've been waiting FOREVER. but it was quite worth it, although i did have to read the whole story from the beginning to remember what was going on.
in regards to the author's note you posted at the end of this chapter, i don't think the storyline was too rushed. it makes sense that kyrian and tanya's relationship has progressed so quickly to this stage, given their history. but i am protesting because i know it'll mean that the story will come to an end soon, unless you've planned for some unexpected twist in events...i'd welcome that :)
anyway, i'm liking this story quite a lot. particularly because i'm not coming across any grammatical errors and such and it's quite an entertaining read.
thanks for updating once again, and i REALLY hope you update again son.
| Morine 10/2/09 . chapter 15
I just read what has already been posted of this story in the span of a few days. And I absolutely love it!
I'm just a little curious about one thing though...Kyrian...
Is it pronounced key rian or kye rian, like rye, but kye? Or am I just completely off? Because I'm not so sure how to pronounce his name. This doesn't really matter too much being that I read this story and it is not spoken to me, but I'm curious about these things.
I do think that maybe some things moved too fast. But that might just be because I read clumps of chapters in one sitting.
I do hope that there will be more than one chapter to come because I'm not ready for this story to end...but I am looking forward to see what the ending to this story will be.
| Ponder000 10/1/09 . chapter 1
i think you need to work on a few things. eg the beginning is a bit sloppy, its funny but need to be written better. however when it went on, i found it rather entertaining. But i cant help but think it can still improve.
| MarloCarlo10 9/30/09 . chapter 15
Aww that's so sad, poor Glendon and his family (
But I guess it's good the truth finally came out and they got together )
Ah man I'm glad everything's out...or almost everything.
| MarloCarlo10 9/30/09 . chapter 14
Lol I love her dad D
Oh Chad and Nessa how I love them so!
Oh Ky...he's so CUTE when he's jealous )
| walkonair 9/30/09 . chapter 15
I don't really think you're rushing this at all. Hormones 'I Love You's' hot clothes a bunch of dancing/attached at the hipness (hey, a new word!) sex.
Also, yeah, about 90% of the 'M' rated stories on FictionPress are more 'MA' . . .but, like most things related to FP's rules (), the mods do nothing about it. (Can you tell I'm a bit bitter about FP? You CAN? I never would have guessed :)
| KelaBelle 9/30/09 . chapter 15
wow great chapter x