This is funny yet good. I like the challenge idea. Did it justice. ^.^
Luck writing.

I really liked this, good job.

That was...simply amazing. Truly.

Aw that was fun/cute/nice/amusing/weird.
:)

Hey Kid,


A word of advice:


If you're going to attempt to "flame" someone like you did earlier...at least have the balls to stand behind it. I mean, I understand it was your first time doing so... given the poor quality it was in. But seriously, spewing random gay crap in a review and then quickly blocking that person is about as effective as shouting an insult at someone in a crowded hallway and then ducking. I mean, I understand that you're sexually frustrated... given the nature of your "writing" but there really is no need to advertise it whenever you find an "opportunity". What I'm saying is, maybe you should spend less time masturbating to two guys anal raping each other and more time, I don't know, putting your angry thoughts together. You see, when I read what you wrote, I don't see someone who has their shit together or who knows exactly what it is they're getting into... what I see is a little girl who is too caught up in what her little friends think of her... I mean, you may have been thinking "Oh golly gee whiz, look what I have produced right here, my comrades are sure going to get a kick out of this one!". Or maybe your mind is somewhere else, maybe it too is in the realm of contemplating a sex change and the joys you could have with a penis and a set of balls. In any case, you have a lot of potential but it seems like you won't be able to get out of the "invisible audience" phase any time soon. With that being said, I hope you enjoy waiting in line for the penis-that-could-be.


Forever Yours,


Royal Bliss.

this is so curiously beautiful.

which is my favorite kind of beautiful.
c:

VERY CUTE!

I just told you on AIM that I really like this story, so yeah. that was my review. XD

I love Luke and Cal to bits ^^ Cal because he's a little bugger, and Luke...he's so adorable in his scrawny suicidal way ^^ And I'm glad to see they both lived! Yay! *happy ending whore...usually* And for some reason I really love the line "Don't worry," I tell her. "He only hurts himself." I don't know why...it just made me laugh. (I'm a bad person =_=) Anyway, loved it! :3

Ha this was great. It's so unique...made me laugh because its just so blunt - you did a really good job of balancing the angst and the humour, i liked it! :)

Oh, I like... I do. (You started a few sentences with "I" at the end.) Very easy to imagine it in my mind. :]

I love these challenges, they´re making you update more often >:D

I felt so sorry for the little kid at that house... And I´m glad Luke didn´t do it at the end and that Cal didn´t end up to be as big an asshole as he seemed at first :) Great as always

That was amazing. Again with my 'it's too late for a real review but i feel the need to at least say /something/' lame excuse. But this was absolutely amazing.
I can't believe you don't like it! D:
That has to be one of the most beautiful, charming stories that's not full of fucking fanfiction and song lyrics and junk that just completely ruin a good story (not that fanfiction is bad at all, but the stuff that doesn't even try... >.

I loved it too. Specifically how it ended.

oh my god, fictionpress
when did they change how to review?


anyhow
i totally remember that dude getting his head chopped off on a bus
insane!