Gah! This review button is throwing me off!
But this was a really amazing haiku. So much emotion and passion in such a little poem.

The term collide makes it sounds like an accident, or something big and disastrous.

"So we were running along, and then our lips collided. Shes still in the hospital and I just got out with a broken rib."

Beautiful, so much expressed in so few words. Keep writing.

God Bless You
Holli xx