At first I was a bit worried about the amount of underlining but reading this a couple of times it seems that this poem was written in a fit of anger and the anger has not been glossed over at all. And that is good. Why shouldn't any young lady be angry at the lustful eyes that men and boys look at them with?

Just one thing TheBeautyOfTheGrave, I hope that you don't stay this angry with men forever. Not all guys are the same, I promise you.

Harry

=] hell yeah, I couldn't agree with you more.

i really like this, my only suggestion is to not use so many underlines next time, but that's just my own personal preference.