this was so cute! i couldn't stop smiling when i was reading this :) great job!

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This was really really good. I enjoyed the style a lot; it was definitely very different, and most certainly in a good way. The emotion between the two of them really is striking, and the chemistry they have, even when they are not physically together. I especially loved the last line:

"And that’s all that matters –not the flowers, not the champagne, not the cheers- love."

I thought that that was really gorgeous, and a perfect ending to the story. There's more?? I can't wait to read it!

Amazing job. :)

The detail is amazing in this. :0
There are a few places where the commas are non-existent, I think.
Like in the first paragraph, you go:

"And he smiling now at her as she stands up in fronts of thousands of people, singing her heart out."
I dunno, but I felt as if there was supposed to be commas, well. I'll just show you:

"And he's smiling now at her, as she stands up in fronts of thousands of people, singing her heart out."

I guess one apostrophe, too.

I really like the title, summary, and yo' penname because, as bad as this sounds, that's what got me to read this story.

:D This is good.
Wait, 'part 3', there's more?
Holy smokes.
I'm going to be a creepin' on your profile, now.

kthnxbai,

Martin the Waterskier.

A short story, but very well written. I'm kinda bummed out that you've only received one other review for it. This story deserves more than that.

~Evasive~

P.S. You've got great grammar. Unlike most other authors, I can see that you actually take care to stick to the rules. I would know, because when I see a mistake, I tend to flinch a little due to my grammar obsession. I didn't flinch once during this entire story. Bravo. :D

AW! RASKDLJASdjaskdxmaskledjiawodjhaskl!
That was my reaction. Oh! That was so, so, so, so, soX948230948348 good! I lawve it! I do! You're such an amazing author. I'm pretty jealous. *pout* And I wish I had a hoodie that said "Lexodus" on the back. I would be a fanclub. I would be an entire club all by my lonesome :P. But, alas, I only have a drama hoodie with "Dicky" on the sleeve and Victoria on the other. Not nearly as impressive.
But, good job. I love how you capture your characters in boxes and analyze them until they're perfect. Great job. :D