Wow. This is a very powerful poem. Good work. :D

I like the repetition and it has rhythm. Its quite musical, i was singing it hehe i like.

:( This is so sad. No one should hurt you. you're just an amazing person.

~Yusuf

First of all, I'm not sure I'm crazy about the irregular capitalization. I know that when writing poetry, you can have a certain disregard for grammatical functions, but there are certain bits where capitalization just isn't needed and detracts from the poem.

I like the repetition of 'Hurt me, break me'. It holds a different meaning each time I read it.

-Stardust, of the Review Marathon (link in my profile.

"Cause tonight is my last"...'Cause

I didn't like how you capitalized break me sometimes, but not others. Personally i like it better not capitalized, but either one or the other would be better than switching I think. I have to say I don't like this piece so much. It's kinda cliched and the ending is kind of over the top for me. I've read enough of your work to know you can be much more creative than this. That said, it is very relateable and I do like the repetition.

(cries) that's so sad! Wha!

Die, murderer, die! *yelling at person the POV is talking to*