I was so mad when you killed Alaric! LOL. But I'm really glad he wasn't actually dead :) So I loved this story. It was amazing and so full of history and detail that I adored it. I can't wait to read the sequel, especially because I liked the characters so much :D

This was such a great prologue. It got me hooked and now I can't wait to read more of the story :D

my last review said that ch.20 is the best
scratch that
this is the best chapter!

the best chapter[:

I just wanted to let you know that I quite enjoyed reading this and that I'll be looking forward to the edited version. [:

i just started reading this story and i'm so glad that i found it! You are the first writer that i have stumbled upon on fp which includes their faith in their stories. I really like how you included God and give all credit to him...and I entirely agree on what you wrote on your profile. You're an amazing writing..and seem to be an amazing person too. i look forward to reading more of your work =]

Beautiful ending!

lol it was... i love anwen

Hi,

I wanted to know the name of the sequel plz...

thanks

A beautifully enticing story. I love the names and how you incorporated the language and culture of the Saxons and Celts into the story, it makes it so much more real. You are a wonderful writer and I absolutely adored your story! At one of the points where Anwen is crying over Alric I started to tear up, and later on when Leofwine died, I was so upset!! I really liked him... But I suppose that sometimes.. it's the tragedies that make the story, right?
Keep writing!
IFightWithInk

I really liked your story and i´m looking forward to reading the sequel. I just wanted to point out some mistakes that could put a stop in the flow of reading. 1. (chapter 4 and 10)For another thousend years potatoes are unknown in europe. sailors bring them from south america to europe in 16th century. but they are not commonly known as food till the 1750s. You could exchange the potatoes with parsnip, a vegetable root that is used instead until the potato shows up, especially in britain.(http://en./wiki/Parsnip)
2. In chapter 28 you wrote "Sigebehrt was dead" wich he isn´t as we all know. So this might be a little bit confusing for a second.
I hope this can help you editing your story.
Have fun writing the sequel cya @ chaotic soul. :)

...i love u 4 this...it was amaizing...

That was awesome! I really loved this story!

Okay, so first of all: this isn't an epilogue! That's some serious foreboding stuff right there, dear. No matter--I LOVE IT! Well, I mean, I'm not going to lie, I really did want a true happy ending, but this just means there's going to be more magical storytelling! I'm SO excited! In all honesty, I had some serious doubts when I clicked on this story. I thought she was going to be all, IhateyouforkillingmyfamilybutOMGyou'rejustsoHOTthatIcan'tthinkstraight *droolz*

I don't think I could possibly thank you enough for not doing that. Really. I absolutely adore the characters, and I'm completely awed by how you portrayed their emotions. I found it realistic, and the character development was seamless, in my opinion. I know there are probably people out there who would like to smack me because this story goes against 19323 kinds of feminist rules and all that anti-romance stuff, but I thought it was convincing enough to bring the unlikely plot to life.

Don't stop writing! There'd be tears involved.

Interesting... I liked it for the most part. The epilogue has me a bit confused. You made it sound as if Weiland hates the Celts with a very strong passion, but just a few chapters before you show that one of his reasons for hating his brother - maybe his largest reason - is because he loved Alaric's mother and wanted to marry her, who was Celtic. I would think that would make him at the most indifferent about Celtics in general. Especially since it seems he still must have alot of love for the woman though she's dead seeing how much he still hate his brother. Therefore, the kind of hate he's displaying in the epilogue for Celtics just doesn't make much sense.

Also, why does he seem to hate Alaric so much when you pretty much told us it's a strong possibility he could be Alaric's father instead of Sigebehrt. I would think he'd have more love for him then all of his other nieces and nephews (if he has any, which I'm only imagining he do with so many brothers but it was never really said) if, for no other reason, than for whom Alaric's mother was.

Just a though... Nice job!

~Cyndra