I know you say that you're editing but it's been a couple of years, will you please upload the original? Pretty please with a cherry on top? :P

I absolutely love this!:)

I like this story )

Why do you have only posted three chapters? Is it not complete? :-(
Great story so far!
Mira

I hoped that she can escape! But unfortunately not... :-(
Mira

Great chapter! Really interesting idea and plotting! I hope, you'll continue your story! ;-)
Mira

Despite the fact that you don't have the full story on this story it has already captivated my heart. I love that Anwen's want and desire is so clear, I also admire her strength in this situation. She is very strong willed and I liked the fact that she didn't simply give up when she was captured, she fought several times to escape (despite them being futile). Another character I found extremely interesting is Alaric, I don't like what he has done (killing her family), however, you can tell that he is truly intrigued by Anwen. I would wish that continue this story on your site and really consider publishing because this a story I would buy.

For the love of desperate readers crazy about this story, PLEASE UPDATE!

Please update soon! You have such potential and it is saddening to see people just stop. You have more reviews in a couple chapters than anybody could ever dream of.

Any chance of you finishing this story? :)

This story is really good. Very well written. The characters are believable and real. The plot is really good. Sorry it won't be updated on here anymore. Haveing someone steal your writing sucks. I'm sorry it happened to you.

First of all I would like to say this story is amazing, I loved the chracters especially Anwen, i love how she is so strong and determined and Alaric's character as well, he sounds fit lol,that's really bad that ur story had been plagiarized, ill e-mail u and hopefully u will send me the password...:)

Wow, I'm sorry that this happened to you. I'm not sure under what capacity this occurred but I know that having your work (your artistic product) plagiarized is just as bad as having something tangible stolen. I write on and though this was a minor occurrence another writer downloaded my entire story and reposted it under her own name on several sites. She claimed that she had given me credit on her profiles but I was still really angry so I understand how you feel. I am however obsessed with this story so I hope you are still accepting applications to your website because I will be sending one in the near future.

First, wonderful chapter. This story is so engaging that I feel like I'm reading a novel. You could have this published and I swear I would buy it. This was a very interesting chapter, lots of new developments. I feel bad for Deirdre, it's obvious she cares about Alaric but I can't help but want Alaric and Anwen together. As I said, great chapter, I'm really enjoying this fanfic.

Very interesting. I was a little surprised to read that Alaric has a betrothed. That compliments things a bit doesn't it . . . Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter and find Alaric surprisingly charming. At the same time, I still really admire Anwen's courage and strength, though I'm a little surprised she hasn't attempted suicide yet. On to the next chapter!