Del is an idiot. She's annoying me more and more now. Maybe it's her father, and not that boyfriend of hers? Geh, I want to know! You must update soon! It's absolutely fascinating so far...i can't wait to read more!

How are Derrick and Delaney so stupid? I mean, i get keeping it a secret, but people are NOT that dumb.

Akiko's boyfriend is NOT a nice man. She's like anorexic, and maybe getting hit, or cutting herself?

Grr. And she sneezed in his mouth! HA! Is her name Nadeve or Nadine? You all her both at one point. Any one, I love the entrance of a **. But how is she still in the same grade? Wouldn't she have to stay back because she missed two years?

yo yo. Please continue updating! soon, very soon.

Great story! I really like it.

Haha. The begining of this chapter pulled me in. It was funny. Please don't give up on this story!

hello, this is an awesomee story =DD
Hope you update soon. like very soon

OH my gosh love your story! its really funny and witty, and i think you deserve alot of credit. m try to keep onto the story plot - like what happend to the counselling sessions?? and ttheres not enough depth about jack an his murky past.(: but do update!! I super love your story!!

Only aft chap 2 and you are immediately on my fav stories list! You are awesome! I love this chapter, it makes me laughed like a maniac my mom thought i was going crazy. Great work there but do keep the updates comgin in! I cant wait for more chapters

Ha! You caught me, lol. Just seeing that greeting made me press that review button just to share my amusement. (: I like your story; I hope you continue to update despite the infrequency of it. But don't blame all those lurkers out there... we eventually review. Like now :) We just get lazy and half the time we don't know what to say, but people like me don't like leaving messages like "OMG! I LUV UR STORY." because while it is flattering and makes one smile, it's kind of blank. And pointless.

Sad to say that I'm going to pull a pointless review (if you hadn't noticed it yet):

I LOVE YOUR STORY. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN.

(LOL.)

-a reviewing lurker
hahahaha.

Hi! I usually leave long reviews, but I'm pressed for time, and at the same time, I don't want to leave you with nothing... so I just wanted to say that I like the development of this story and the progression of Jack and Delaney's relationship from friend to a more intense stage. The information you leave us with each chapter adds to the building of character since I can almost see what you're going to do with certain aspects of introduced information - such as, Jack's mother suicide and Aki's abusive father. The way these experience are tied with a character makes the readers understand more about our lovely cast. :)

Forgot to mention, I liked the foreshadowing of Aki's bruises. But I never expected it to be her father... if her father IS abusing her. I always suspected the boyfriend - WHO, by the way, I think is a complete tight arse.

The only thing that bothers me is the way Del is taking Jack's love confession. I don't know what exactly about her reaction that's bothering me, but I'll let you know when I figure it out. x) Anyway, that's my short review. LOL, bye!

wooah her father? haha this is sucha gwd stroy that nadeve is sucha ** ;L

Omg I've just finished my GCSEs! Don't worry, everyone just revised INTENSELY during the exams but the coursework was a rhymes with witch! Anyway great story, definitely one of my faves, I'm also a sporadic updater so believe me I understand, but please update soon?

I realized that your comment applied to me and I felt bad. It's true that most of us, readers, add authors and stories to our alerts but do not reviews. As author on I like when my readers review, so I will here and now.

I LOVE your story, I'm following it since the beginning and I admire your writing talent and determination because you are one of the few that actually seems to take the time of really having a story and not a cliché. I love your characters and truly admire your creativity and talent.

You have a great vocabulary by the way. Thanks for being one of the few authors that has a real story, imagination, talent and determination to actually complete it and not leave your reader without a chapter.

:) Your story is amazing.

Great story so far... Please update soon!