|Reviews for The ABC's of Jack Sanders|
| steffxnie 4/24/09 . chapter 2
bahahah i laughed so hard at this!
loved the slow motion of the gum part ;D
be back soon for the rest!
| SlightlyBizarre 4/24/09 . chapter 6
I would first love to say what a great job you have done with your story! I absolutely love it! i could read this for days on end.. if i could i mean. school is kicking my butt! I LOVVED
LOVE This chapter :D Please update as soon as you can!
and by the way, i have seen the Korean Drama too. Hana Yori Dango is so addicting i know what your talking about! i didnt finish the first season, thats because im on the last episode, but yeah some pretty addicting stuff!
Did you know about the Manga? its pretty good but the author of Boys before flowers- hana yori dango- also wrote Cat Street, its a pretty good manga you should check it out at :D
DARN YOU ADDICTING SHOWS!
but yeah, i love your writing, please update as soon as you can!
P.S Yeah i like your pen name :D
| forever.ephemeral 4/24/09 . chapter 6
The tantrum made me smile-I have the same issue with my sister!
Aw...how sweet. Jack just went ahead and told her how he felt. :)
Nice new pen-name.
| I Murder on Impulse 4/24/09 . chapter 6
Aw so cute!
| Counting Luv Toxic Stars 4/19/09 . chapter 5
I think the note was jack sharing his feelings with her
And he was shocked when he walked in the gym n saw del with
Collin, especially when del said she likes collin... Any
Who I like these cliché stories... I'm totally team jack
Write more please soon ]
| rawr 4/14/09 . chapter 5
marvellous work, hun. Very attachable characters! Don't keep us waitin 2 long!
| WordGirl 4/13/09 . chapter 5
I have to say lovey, you have me totally addicted this story, more soon please,,
| Blancei 4/12/09 . chapter 5
Okay, first of all, I sincerely apologize that I haven't reviewed your story until today. I'm really, really sorry, but I've been out with my family for the past few days, so I haven't had a chance to go on the computer/call you.
and Wow! You changed your penname again! Aurora stars sounds cool lol. I was so surprised when I saw it.
This chapter was great as always, although the detention thing might be a bit cliched (reminds me of We've Got A Big Mess On Our Hands?) :) You're so good at using real life experiences for writing (like the heart dissection and peer counselling thing :P)
Since I was such a bad bff, I'm gonna try to make up for it by giving you excellento improvement advice :D
During the part when you wrote 'Chris and Jack had mentioned a hilarious incident which had occurred during chemistry...'I was kinda confused about when that had happened. Were they in the same class as she was? Or did it happen in their previous class? I think you meant in their previous class, so you might wanna mention something like that? And maybe the part with '"Would you like me to repeat myself again, Ms Coleman?" an icy voice said.', you might wanna add something like, 'Mr Gerington's icy voice interruped my trip down memory lane.' Or is memory lane only for memories from a long time ago? :P lol. Actually, it might only be me who is confused, so yeah, it's totally up to you.
Besides that, I loved the chapter! We're getting to know so much more about Jack now :D Can't wait for the next update, keep up the great work!
PS- Sorry, I think I probably won't be able to go out much during this break, because my piano exam is in-gasp- 1 week's time! And I can hardly even play the songs smoothly! I am going to DIE. I'll call you sometime next week...Ok, I need to go now, I'm getting a bit dizzy.
| xximinluvxx 4/10/09 . chapter 5
rawr i want more! lol
im curious to see what you come up with... :)
| justabasketcase 4/9/09 . chapter 5
so, when will th enext update ba?
i cant wait.. i'm loving it more and more with every chapter i read.
unfortunately, it's only til chapter 5. bummer. so yeah. update soon. i'll keep o waiting! :D
but please.. not too loong :((
| Annie 4/9/09 . chapter 5
My friend sent me this link and its really as awesome as she said it was! I love Delaney, even though she can be so clueless at times. And, needless to say, I love Jack even more! He's so sweet, trying to warn Del, and her she is, ignoring him and focusing all her attention on the stupid old dunce Colin. Well, yeah, he sounds hot, but not as hot as poor ol' Jack :(
Really, update soon! Perhaps I'll create an account and submit a linked review, if you do :) Pretty please (with a cherry on the top!)
Don't let me down!
| i heart abc's xoxo 4/9/09 . chapter 5
zomg, this is the best story ever! i'm so desperate to find out what happens next, so for the sake of my heart, update now. NOW. NOW!
| DesireToSmile 4/8/09 . chapter 5
I feel I need to compliment your word choice and your writing; you write very well for a 15 year old!(you are 15 right?...because I'm pretty sure your last chapter update said you turned 15 on your birthday)Seriously! Good work! I know some people older than you would not be able invoke such emotion and form sentences so smoothly like you do. I gotta tell you, I wasn't feeling the detention hall teacher and student thing. Yuck!
Creson Creston. Haha, say that 5 times fast :P
"Do you have cramps or something?" Hahaha. FUNy.
Aw, Jack was being all protective of her and being the "prince" that "rescues" her from the "bad guy"...and then she has to go and make him feel hurt. Bo.
Read/Review you my new story if you have a chance :)
| msallaroundperfect 4/8/09 . chapter 5
Loved the story. update soon.
| Knowledge is Power 4/8/09 . chapter 5
that is so sad. how could she