I enjoyed your version of the lyrics. I'll think of this story when I hear the song.
The characters are quirky and endearing:)

i chuckled when i saw your story title. brings back some memories...billy bragg on a cheap cassette. interesting take on the girl.

I love this. I like the anonymity of not knowing their names, and how he dotes on her, and her spontaneity, and that last part. great writing. what does the title mean?

Nice. It really made me smile. :)

I love all your stories, especially because of the high count of British men. :] Great job.

Hello there. I don't have a FP account so I am unable to PM you about Ireland, so leaving you a 'review' was the next best option. I would definitely suggest stopping in a small town called Doolin in County Clare. It is known for it's traditional Irish music. I know you enjoy music, so if you are into the traditional stuff, it's definitely a place to stop. The town has a grand total of 3 pubs (I went to 2 of them) and they have live music in the evenings. It's about an hour from the Cliffs of Moher. And really, anywhere you visit in Ireland is awesome. The people are lovely and the country is gorgeous, so definitely see all that you can. And by the way, I am totally envious that you are making the trip. I've been dying to go back.

well I'm serbian [along with croatian, but my father is the serbian one, and that's what matters in this instance] and my father never did that, what a drag! lol

anyway, brilliant piece here, thoroughly enjoyed it!

So I read this mostly to kill some time, but I found that I liked it- a lot. It was kind of vague, but at the same time, almost like it could be anyone's love story. It's the kind of snapshot you could get from a photograph, but more real. I really enjoyed it!

I love this story. 'Twas very svet.It kind of reminded me of the movie 'sweet november' I don't know why though... so never mind about that.

Beautiful.

Loved it. Great job. The chemistry between them was good. Keep it up!
Faith

It's a little vague (the technical term for the disease, or whatever it was, still doesn't explain what it is, since I'm too lazy to go look it up XD), but it's well-written and quite charming. They're far from conventional and very entertaining. The title loses meaning on me (I suppose it has something to do with the aforementioned disease), but maybe it's just because I'm ignorant.
Kudos to Queen of Absolutely Everything for adding this to our c2. (:

I think that I will find these characters rather annoying because she is too much of a bubbly, annoying, "free" person but she's scarred and gets mood swings and he seems to already be in love with her which is a bad deal and despite all that I'm going to read the story if you continue because you're a rather great writer and I'm interested to see what you're going to do with these characters. Now that my run-on sentence is done... until you write again. :)

I really love how you write. Seriously. This story is really cute, albeit sad (i got the feeling that she's going to die - hope i'm wrong).

I just CAN'T wait for you to write a loonng story. Better than Burroughs was absolutely amazing. And now i just want MORE ! ;)

Wow, i loved this! A beautiful piece of writing that had me curious until the end :)