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Cannot fathom a PenName 2008-12-21 . chapter 1
Quite true, quite true.
Lovely poem!
Dale Christopher 2008-12-16 . chapter 1
It's sort of like an endless cycle. I can relate to this. I do think grief would have been a better choice of word over sad, because joy and rage are emotions, while sad is more of a state of being. But I'm not one to get over technical about poetry.

Peace, Daze
notfortheintelligent 2008-12-15 . chapter 1
You've been read and appreciated : )

"Sad" is not an emotion though, so it doesn't make sense in that line. But I like the ideas behind the poem.
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