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SerialXLain 2009-04-17 . chapter 1
I wanted to make a snowman this year but forgot to... The last time I did, no one added boobies, but my brother shot it till it fell over...

Aw. That was sweet. I'm kind of afraid. D:


Aw.
frogs of war 2009-02-21 . chapter 1
That was cute and just sappy enough.

I've been to family gatherings like that. One Christmas when I was a kid, my mother's family (she's one of thirteen) gathered at our house and an uncle videotaped it, but not one of us who lived in the house appeared on the tape at all.
Naomi Schemer 2008-12-28 . chapter 1
I admit, most of what I have been reading and seeing makes me happy that my family doesn't celebrate Christmas. I'm happy for Armand - loneliness is horrible. Lovely story - sparse and heartwarming, which fits.
Mya 2008-12-28 . chapter 1
Hm...the no tv part made me feel lonely. But at least he had a 'friend' for christmas! ^^
the Berserker 2008-12-16 . chapter 1
... Odd. Very odd.

The whole 'licking of slick armpit' thing majorly squicked me - but I don't really think the story did much for me in any way other than that. It certainly wasn't bad - you're as well-written as ever - but it was more like one of those passing things...
Feel The Waltz 2008-12-16 . chapter 1
Aww man, that was super cute. The hopeless romantic cheeseball inside wants to fall in love one chistmas. I thought the choice of coupling in this was very adorable too. :)
nonaccount 2008-12-15 . chapter 1
Your writing just keeps getting better and better. I like the cadence of this it seems to mirror Armando's personality. While I was reading this, especially the allusion to sex, "Upstairs in bed...", I thought, not for the first time, I'm going to be browsing in a bookstore one day and unwittingly happen upon something you've written.
Happy Merry Christmas and Merry Happy Holidays!
Spanderholic 2008-12-15 . chapter 1
That was really cute!
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