At the beginning of this story I wasn't sure what to expect, but by the end I completely understood. This story is a good in-depth story of someone who God has changed. I've tried to focus on that with my writing, and I love the way you pulled this together, keeping it slightly more adult. The only complaint I have is that in a couple of places there are spelling or grammar mistakes. But, other than that, great! :)

oya...another thing..
tears came out when i read this...LOL!
m..i guess..its because of terry.
he's so naive and sweet.

Yeah..it's amazing what love can do..
love gives hope.
hope to live another day...day by day.
love also gives tears..disappointment.
human is dead without love.

The love of of God of course...the perfect love.
That no one can give.

anyway..
Nice story..altho it's only a short one.
and it moves fast.
i was kinda hoping it's a longer story. hehehe.
coz, u have an interesting chemistry there.
how about telling the story of how she's moving on her life..and terry. =)

and...i think its suppose to be like this.
"how many money was left" -> "much"