Very sweet poem - I don't think anything's wrong with it, other than a few unneeded words and the format. Perhaps it doesn't go very deep - but neither, it would see, does the relationship.

Kudos.

~Effervescent-Sentiments

Heh- dude. This is cool.

I've bever been quoted before XD


Sweet little poem, I love the 'A shoebox full/A lifetimes worth' line. That's a pretty image.

I dont write peotry much, so i cnat really give a propper reveiw. But deh. I like.

Lovelove

Erasmuss.