This is beautiful, I love it. Definitely proves wrong the misconception that freestyle poems aren't all that great. Keep up the good work.

This is quite.. engaging. I liked the use of the 2nd person, as though addressing directly to the reader, or better yet as though the reader was saying it to someone. Very effective. Also great structure.

I'm confused about one thing... is "smiling" meant to show oblivion or schadefreude? (Hopefully just oblivion, which is bad enough already..)

And.. I know how this feels.

~fleur x