This is pretty fucking awesome.
L-i-k-e Love =]
Jack is amazing ~ If only everyone was like him.
Can't wait for the next chapter mah dear.
::))

I love it so far & I hope you update soon Jack.

I love Jack Saturday, he's my hero (:

I've really enjoyed this story so far. I hope there will be more. You've set it up so that there can be lots of potential action coming up. I can't wait to see! I love your writing. It's really a cut above the rest. Love your thorough style.

This story is so great. Interesting plot, unique, realistic characters, it's funny, and also, it's really damn CUTE. I mean I don't know how you made it sort of touching and funny and cute and just the right amount of sexy when it's about vampires and all, but seriously. Awesome. And the writing's awesome. I can't think of any actual helpful criticism... I'm just enjoying it. (Normally I avoid WIPs but crap I caved for this one.) Thanks for the read so far! Rock on.

Jacob's so in love but I'm not sure about Jack, he kinda has these pain-troubles with Abe which makes me suspect something is there but it won't go anywhere but might bring some issues in between(does that make sense? o.o). But despite that fact, I think I'm in love with this story! If I could, I would tell my homophobic best friend to read it but I'm not sure if she'll like that. Though, the story is very original, amusing and way hell of a ride. I like road trips~ if there were Jack and Jacob in it, I don't think I'll ever get bored! Just goes without saying that I'm a freak over boy love(Gay Sex, that is *winks*)

Aw, poor jacob! I like Jack's attitude but I still don't like him. Well, I have to say, this story is awesome. Not bad at all! I love it!! And I'm gonna continue readin!

wow, this story is amazing.

I found it on the sweet revolutions nominations list and I'm incredibly happy that i spent the time to read it.

I can't wait for the rest
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I can't really explain it, but for some reason, I do -not- trust Jacob at all... There's something about him...

I'm really enjoying this story. It's the most refreshing vampire!fic I've read in a long while! :3 You know, I keep randomly shouting "Jack Staurday Can't Fail!" just to annoy people? Yeah, Jack and Jacob have that affect on me. XD Can't wait to read more. Please update.

Normally I'm not one to read stories that aren't already complete, mostly because of the fact that I'm terribly impatient to see how things will turn out, but the summary for this one simply drew me in. Then I met the characters and I was caught.

I have to say that it has been a long while since I have come across a pair as unique, quirky and hilariously well-suited as Jack and Jacob. They are entirely fresh for me with their 'problems' that never seem to push over the line of tasteful into simply emo. I love them. They each have their own problems, even if we see more of Jack's than Jacob's at this point and their slight insanity simply makes me want to find out more about them, to see how their relationship will evolve.

I can see the hints of something big happening to Jack and I love how you snuck those instances in there without overbearing them, the big revelation left for later when things have developed more. It's unfolding perfectly. The little changes in him are also gradual and subtle enough that it was only when I finished the most recent chapter I realised with glee exactly how much the relationship with Jacob was affecting Jack.

Anyway, I love the story and I'm looking forward to reading more of it! The humour, the drama, and the mystery are incredible and I will love seeing how things play out.

good story, interesting take on gay vampires, looking forward to next chapters.

An asexual in the story? That's wonderful! There's hardly ANY stories that have asexuals, though I like to pretend that some people that don't have obvious preferences are asexual. I'm asexual, and there are so few references to us... :D You have made me very happy.

Oh, by the way, I love your work. I just recently discovered your account. I've read metanoia and bought the God Eaters and everything. Keep on being awesome, and I'll keep on being happy.

Have a good life.

Hello :)
I just came across your storys and I have to say I'm astonished how good they are. I thought I know about all good authors on fictionpress but somehow you have fly under my radar till now. So I'm sorry that I just now get the pleasure to read your works. I'm sad that you have gotten not that much reviews for your work and wanted to let you know that there are sure many people who consume your works regulary.
I hope my english is not too bad, I'm German and a litte rusty with english writing ;)
Have a nice weekend,
Tamura

more please!
parts just cracked me up... so you made my day...
i'd write more here but i have lots of homework which i put off just so i could read your story... i have to do that now
more soon please!