Yes a werewolf fic.

Hey! What's new?

You asked me to tell you what I thought, and I feel I can tell you part of that now. If I don't tell you what I thought so far, you might not get a review from me for a while yet.

I've read about halfway through. The beginning couple chapters really caught and drew me in with the style and personality of your writing. As the story progresses, your spelling gets sloppy and the thoroughness gets lesser and lesser. I completely understand it's hard to keep your original quality through a whole story, because I have lots of trouble with that.

The plot advances slowly, a little too slow for me, though. I appreciate the uniqueness of a female new kid as opposed to the boy new kid, but that confuses me as to who gets Claire in the end. Connor, I suspect, is also a wolf, and I don't really like his character or the chemistry and relationship between him and Claire.

It's a good story. Please don't feel this is a personal attack. I will review again once I am finished.

Love,
Ma'am

I love this story.
:D
You have no idea how obsessed and determined I was to finishing this once I started reading it.
This should definitely be published.

-KIx0x

i thought katie mentioned the girls death...

claire really needs to learn the concept of the word no...lol

poor kid.

i keep thinking that nicole or connor are going to end up being shapeshifters. lol. probably not going to happen though after the names were said for the people in the play.

dude...they were creepy...

travis the puppy overlord...lol

LOL story teller's shadow is my beta!!

aww cute little puppy is a shapeshifter isnt he??

i want to slap claire now and pound her face into a tree for that last line. wtf? i mean really!

aw tahts cute...finally they got together. i've begun to roll my eyes during their conversations...

i'm serious!

hahaha "Bridget we know your seceret!!"

Bridget: Pulls out flame thrower Then you must die!!

AH NO

This is really good so far. I like your writing style, not to mention your choice of location. I've been to Black Mountain. It's a nice little town.

~Melori

Yay! A sequel! I'm glad you're writing one, it still didn't seem...well quite complete.

You will HAVE to publish Shift. It is an amazing story, I love it so so much! When you do (because I have no doubt that if you are persistent and add fix some of the mistakes Molly and I had written about) I will buy at least 10 copies. And be happy that I could review such a great book.

Now...about suggestions. Maybe draw the story out a bit more. Don't switch abruptly throughout ideas in chapters. Add a bit more description.Lengthen it. That's all I can think of, it really was written very well.

Thanks so much for a great read!

That was just...great. The only thing in this chapter was the quick reunion of Bridget and her family. Their fight seemed to go down deeper, and I don't think it would take so little for them to be together again. I think it would be better if you put it like this: The 'you're my daughter' part is great, keep that, I really like it. The "I wasn't being fair to Bridget" came a bit fast. Maybe say "I might not have been fair" and that they will work on their relationship. Other then that, great ending. I loved it.