The words flowed so beautifully...wow.

This is a horribly disappointing attempt at sounding poetic. The extra details make me want to shove a sock in your mouth. (You make it sound as if your were reciting this lyrical crap) Please do not try to be a philosophical if you are going to be so serious, or otherwise have no such extraordinary point to make. Ordinary points can sometimes sound impressive if worded properly. I couldn't get past the first few sentences, a first for me.

This gave me goosebumps. Beautiful word choice and imagery. Favorite line would have to be "delicate spiders on my palm, tracing whispers". (:

Really lovely images - I loved the poem, the way its tone was so formal, but you were speaking of childrens' feelings, emotions, and senses.

I would remove the "and" in the first line of the third stanza, and put a question mark (though this is optional) at the end of hearts.

Other than that, a very powerful poem. :)

Keep writing!

~Effervescent-Sentiments

Your word choice in this poem was beautiful. I think that's what stood out to me the most. Very well done =)

After all this while, I'm still impressed by your work I must say. Technically I thought this was faultless; the last line of each stanza was neat. I felt this poem was very well thought through, and again, brilliant job with the words and all. You do know how to write a good poem.

Keep it up!

this is beautiful.
utterly beautiful.
it displays the wonderful analytically chosen phrases for things beyond your analysis. i love how riddle with symbolism it is. And you have no idea how much effect the word ethereal voice has on me. wonderful. keep it up.