"Tu me vois
et tes yeux me sourient
Mais les mots
qui partent ta bouche,
Brisent mon coeur.
Et j’essaie de t’échapper,
Avant que tu
me détruis complétement."

I loved this half of the poem. It's sad, but you wrote it really beautifully.

French poetry seems much more sophisticated, i think :)

Know how this feels... This is like at the beginning of a relationship when no-one is sure of how the other one feels. Especially loved the fact that it's in French, making it sound even more temptative XD
~fleur