well written. but not realistic.

I can't wait for the next update. I don't know why I believe everything Murphy says. Like at first I believed Amos too be the main character and honest, but as soon as Murphy said something bad about him I didn't doubt murphy's judgement at all.

OMG, this story really grew on me. i really cannot wait to see what happens next. oh , and the puppy thing, how friggin sweet!

Yes it's a good story so update it xD

It's a western. The guys are over twenty, they drink, they smoke, and probably smell a great deal of the time. Yet I find myself quite fond of this story :)!

This is an excellent story so far. I'm really into it. I feel so conflicted about the characters, I can't wait to see where this all goes. I hope to read more soon! Love it!

such a good story... NOW UPDATE IT.

"Hi! You faved a story of mine..."

Er, that was me. Haha!

Hi! You faved a story of mine so I came over to see if you had any good slashy fic and found this wonderful story! Love the voice and pacing, and honesty of the characters (even Davey). Even though it's been a few months I am holding out hope to see an update soon. I am a fan of westerns so it's so great to see one that is m/m as well as being such a fun read. Thanks for sharing this!

this is /excellent/. the characterization, pacing, language... you really got the genre down, and it shows.

Somehow this story just sucked me in and made me read all 10 chapters at once like THE characterdevelopment even thiugh I didn't see why Amos/Davey chose that moment to blow his cover.

It seems obvious that Murphy is into him, or is that just wishful thinking?

Now.. I've been waiting very patiently for an update but the last one was on 05-23-09!
*starts chanting* we want more we want more we want more!

This is an intriguing story. You literally have me wondering just how this will go because I can see so many directions you could take it. Your writing is flawless. I cannot wait to see where this story is going.

This is an excellent story! I hope you will consider having this published professionally.
The characters are believable and the story holds my interest.Well done.
A.K.Callens

Its a rare day when you come across such a talented author. Thank you for posting this.