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MSP 2008-12-17 . chapter 1
You rock, Allison. I loved the passion and determination evident through your piece. And I love the mystery behind it all - you don't know this girl, but you see people like her outside everyday.

*poke* Do you not like semi-colons? You need some a few places.
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