I like the rhyming and the good use of words.

What I really like about this is that I can't tell if it's written as a "I'm getting old and I won't always be pretty!" or more of a statement that you will in fact get old, but you're not particularly phased by it. I sort of get this accepting feel from it. Anyway, apart from all that your writing is very enjoyable to read, it doesn't feel forced and you use such interesting words. I enjoyed this one very much.

Peace, Daze

I really enjoyed this one! your words have a lot of rhythm and flow, but the rhyming comes across as very natural and not forced at all. that makes it like... even better :)

I love the way this seems to celebrate skin and the marks, flaws, and wrinkles... as a sort of map of where we've been, instead of losing beauty. thanks for the unique read!

It's a good poem, got a nice flow to it and a lot of great imagery. Idk if it's the rhyme scheme or what, but the elementary way this reads is just charming man.

Absolutely lovely, my dear! Flows beautifully...it was so fun to read.

Except that it occurred to me just now that for some reason, the word skin kind of grosses me out. And I can't explain why.

But I love you and all your words. You're so very eloquent.

Beautiful as always.

Oh I like this one a lot! Good job! :D

Wow, this flows so smoothly, just like young skin...

OMG! I love this poem. It has a great beat to it. Keep at it.