That was absolutely superb. (And sad! But that's better than a happy ending anyway.)

I read half of this a long time ago and then forgot to finish it. :( But I missed you(r writing o.O), so it was nice finding out that I had the rest to finish today.

Lines I liked from what I read today (because I don't remember specific ones from earlier):
"because I’m a ghost and I must be dreaming"

"looking for cigarettes and a place to die."

Um. Liked Jut. He was fun. Elliot was kinda cute or something like that. Liked the end and how it started/ended with the third person Jut-ness.

Glad to see you back (even though you've been back for awhile but I've just been a lazy ** who doesn't feel like reading lately.)

Words cannot provide the proper sort of justice to describe how ** amazing this is. Really. They can't. It's impossible. Just know that this is one of the most fantastic things I've ever read in my entire literary existence. Truly.

This is an amazing piece of writing. The descriptions, the style and technique is epic and I swear, I am in awe right now. I felt like I was right there with El and--**, I hate that he had to die but I won't say it was a bad thing. It sucks for Jut and El because they were so messed up but it was a beautiful kind of messed up, you know?

Your portrayal of Jut is phenominal. Wildcat--Christ, I love that, I really do. I can see it, you? His eyes ** bright and insane as anything, ready to rip your ** head off if you dared cross him. I LOVE it, **, it's so sexy. He's off a complete other planet and it's perfect.

This is one of the first stories I have found written in first person POV that I could not only tolerate but actually thoroughly enjoy. Not once did it ever become jarring or lead away from the story, you stayed perfectly in that character's head the entire time and made it thrilling and dangerous and sad.

“I’m not, s’just... sometimes things are distorted, you know?” Bah, I don't even know why I like this, it just. Ah.

The music is electric through my veins, burning my tissue and smoldering at the papery skin separating my heart from space. I choke on it, this delicious aroma of beats and melodies and gyrating bodies grinding against me. Just felt so hot and heavy and wonderful and I could almost taste the sex. XD

shave my skin off and show Bill just who I really am, a quivering little **, just as frightened of guns as the rest of the world, was pure ** brilliance. It shows that El is well aware of what a poser he really is and it's heartbreaking that he still keeps it up.

He looks at me then and the universe is crashing in his eyes. Favorite. Description. -Ever-.

It's brutal, and sharp and jagged, and it's edges are nowhere near perfect, but it makes readers go O.O wow by hitting them square in the gut by going "** you. here I am, as brutal as I can be, and you're gonna read me, like me and review me, **!"

Just. Bah. My brain is thoroughly melted. This is so bitter I can almost taste it, and the ending. It's one of those endings that tell you everything and nothing of how the character really ends. This was pure perfection. Ah.

I can't thank you enough for writing, and posting, this. Just... I'm so completely in love with it.

I really liked it
Guns and thugs and drugs are neat
I missed you a lot.
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*ehem*
You're back?

oh mon dieu
je l'adore

hi! I didn't get the chance to review this before, because I didn't have internet. but here I am and, like I had any doubt, this is intricate and bitter and lovely like everything you write. it goes everywhere but you always pull it back to this tight core. it branches into violence and mixed-up emotions but falls back to the people every time, and it's amazing.

oh, and you are so welcome. I should really be thanking you for giving me the opportunity to read things like this. I hope you had a great Christmas, and have a good New Years.

yes, yes
definitely a "christmas" story
haha


i loved it, like usual
very pretty slashy violence
your specialty

oh, geez! why'd it have to go all sad? =x

anyway. i love el. jut confuses me a bit, but i love el.

OMG...I love you:D I have been missing your slash stories so much. I'm too happy to write anything constructive. So yeah, I liked it a lot. It felt a bit like reading Gardenhead, which I still hope you will post again some day...And I don't feel that you let me down. I like all your stories now just as much as I did previously. After all, your the only person on fictionpress that managed to find themselves on my favourite authors list. I hope you will post something soon:D