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Negative:
I don't really get the "feet" part. If these were lines, how do they have feet?

Positive:
I like the idea behind this. Not just the parallel but also the part of being so close yet never interacting. Sort of like with your neighbours or something, haha. XD

Good poem. Keep it up!
-Frac

aw... it's just touching and meaningful, sometime people can't be with who they want to.

happy new year.

You are incredible.

I clicked on this because the tile is the same as one of my stories. Cool poem, very simple yet good. :)