Absolutely beautiful poem.Although it was short, it was deep beyond words and struck the innermost workings of my soul. Poetry is definitely an art and you are artistic in a glorious way.

I'm definitely going to keep reading your poems. I think I'll add you to my favorite authors as well.

Btw, I saw your icon and it seems that you are a Code Geass fan. I am too, so it's nice to know we share similar tastes.

This is somehow a really touching poem. It's not that clear, but this is what makes this poem so good. I don't actually like the very bitter sentence, but the other ones work real well.

i took a bite from the forbidden fruit

i wish i had not

for it was very bitter.

I like that part, makes me think about love is bitter...
good poem.

Very nice!