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SassyGrl 2009-11-06 . chapter 18
OMG, are you gonna finish this or edit or anything? I hope u dont quit!
Broken Cascade 2009-08-21 . chapter 14
Okay, so I had to go back and find a chapter I didn't review. See, being lazy really does pay off!
Sorry for the misunderstanding in my last review. It makes a lot more sense when I go back and reread the chapter. It helps to be awake when you write reviews, though apparently it is possible to do it when asleep.
I am terribly sorry about your writer's block. I have free chocolate if it helps. Otherwise, there's a writing community I somewhat recently joined. Sometimes it helps to just talk with other authors. It's at http:// undi-land. ning. com/, just without the spaces. It has absolutely nothing to do with underwear, I promise.
the Pearl 2009-08-07 . chapter 18
A nice cliffie at the end of the 18th chapter, I hope you update soon! The first two chapters were kinda unnecessarily repetative as I just read Blood Bound before this. This chapter was very intriguing, especially how you describe the magic and the sun shining upon the Queen. The name Lilith with its meaning is suiting for her even though it does remind of the Lilith from Supernatural.
Elodie Wolfe 2009-07-23 . chapter 18
Oh shet! Great chapters. I absolutely loved this one. I can't wait to see more. Yay for internet. :D
Love Elodie~
unhinged-goddess 2009-07-03 . chapter 18
The queen didn't see that coming now did she?
TheWorldIsOurs 2009-07-01 . chapter 18
omg new reader
love the story
update soon plz
RoryAceHayden147 2009-06-30 . chapter 18
Update asap!

Amazing chapters!

Au Revoir!
Broken Cascade 2009-06-19 . chapter 18
An absolutely amazing chapter. It was really well written and the descriptions were wonderful. I did not expect the ending at all, but it was better than anything I could of ever come up with. It makes sense though, that removing the curse would kill her, since part of the curse is their longevity. However, I doubt that the room full of vampires is going to wait around for explinations. I can't wait for the next update.
bluetinkerbell 2009-06-19 . chapter 18
this story is so full of tension, i'm about to have a heart attack.

as much as i ADORED the greyson/daphne interactions, the best part had to be daphne's interaction with the magic. i loved it :D
Emilea 2009-06-18 . chapter 18
HAVE I TOLD YOU lately that I love you? Your update was so quick! I am so happy the Queen died! But now I feel so frightened for Daphne and Greyson... BUT I have absolute faith in them.


They will BOTH come out alive and relatively unscathed and then they will have a nice session in the bedroom and then they will have other nice moments. YES please!

:) Get better soon, and maybe drink honeyandlemon tea... bye!
Evangeline Curls 2009-06-18 . chapter 18
whoa...wow that was the most intense ending ever! i can't believe daphne was able to face that...but i wonder what happened w/ the magic? I can't wait to read the next chapter!! please update as soon as possible! I can't wait!!
DHC 2009-06-18 . chapter 18
I wonder what exactly the queen felt when she was so confident that Daphne had succeeded...That's quite the way to end a life of thousands of years but I guess she should have let Daphne test it on one of her subjects first. But now Daphne is still in a lot of danger cuz the rest of em is now after her!! Please update soon!
DeviousVamp 2009-06-18 . chapter 18
holy frick!! what an amazing chapter!! that whole bit where Daphne is imersed in the Queens magic was really amazing, had to be my favourite part of the chapter =]
Can't wait to see how Daphne gets out of this situation, you really do put her in some tight spots!!
Sweetly Sarcastic 2009-06-18 . chapter 18
weird... weird, but good. really good. I really like how you explain the supernatural, because it's not supposed to be logical on a human basis, but it's understandable. That may or not make sense. But the queen is definitely rather creepy- good riddance!

Anyway, really good chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Julia Celeste 2009-06-17 . chapter 17
i absolutely adore this story. please please update soon??
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