i like it! ^^ it's getting more intense! :D
i'm sorry to hear about your purse though...
looking forward to read next chapter :D will the police believed her?? ^^ or maybe she will find out that this maurice guy is working at the police station? LOL :D update soon, please

yay for real reviews! I can't believe you only have three reviewers, and one of them is now your beta reader :( It's an awesome story! you already know I like this, lol ^_^ hope you write the next one quick!

You came back!

Boo hoo. She is really attached to the people she cares about. She doesn't seem able to let go of things (i.e. Danny). Yes, he said that he was going to stay with her, but he needs to move on and grow up and Fee needs to grow up.

Now I totally forgot why Fee's parent's were gone. Could you refresh me, please?

Must go eat now.

aw D: that's so sad...someone was hit by a motorcycle at my school last year...i didn't know her, but others obviously did.
If you find the bastard that stole your purse, think you could give him a bitchslap for me? I loath lowlifes who steal...
hope you get the next chapter out soon! I enjoy editing ^_^

I read 'Premonitions' a couple of hours ago and I just finished this chap. So please update real soon, can't wait for it! ^_^

Poor Fee so close to getting Johnny. (Oh God, "Here's Johnny!" I just watched The Shining.)At least now they know where Johnny and creepy Maurice live.

I was happy to find that I couldn't find any mistakes. irule505 is a very good editor.

So tired...I can't get the "Here's Johnny!" thing out of my head.

*sniffle* poor, poor Felicity :( Will she ever save Johnny? well, I suppose she has to otherwise the story would either go on forever or have an unhappy ending and that would be...unhappy!
You're welcome by the way! Yay, I'm on a bandwagon! I see that you changed a couple things back...either that or I just hallucinated that i ever changed them in the first place...i'm gonna opt for the first one! and obviously its fine since it's your story ^.^ again, I like this chapter! I dunno why; I think it may be the bonding time between best friends :) ttyl!

aw, poor Fee, not being able to save Johnny :( that would suck... lol, Gina is such a **...oh, I would've been SO ** if my boyfriend's mother called me a itch...I dunno what I'd do but it would probably involve lotsa swearing, lol. that little girl who comforted Fee was so cute! XD her mom should really watch hger closer tho...oh, and what does a beta do exactly? just proofreads the story? 'cause I could do that for ya!
Peace!

oow poor Fee :)
I hope she'll get along better next time with Gina ^__^
afterall, Fee's dating her son :)
Great chapter, though I'm a bit sad about Fee not finding Johnny in the park :(

you're welcome!
I noticed that one time, you put just "look" instead of "looked", but that's no big deal; i do that too sometimes. It's especially hard when you've switched tenses, sometimes you forget and writ the wrong one ^_^
now then, will Felicity make it to the park in time? will she save Johnny? will the story end soon? if so, that sux...but at least I'll know what happens, so that one good aspect!
oh wow, this chapter was posted March 12th? sorry for not reading! please update quick!

I'm so sorry I didn't review the last chapter. Been busy trying to get ready for a move.

So...very interesting that Fee's able to have her vision during the day. I don't know how I would handle that. Maurice is such a great name!

Will Fee be able to rescue Johnny?

the story is getting more intense ^_^
will Fee find Johnny? aah :D
next chapter please :)

I'm loving this story as much as i love the 1st one ^_^
The main idea is very interesting, and i like this Simon character very much :D
Be looking forward for the updates ^__^
poor Johnny though...

the ending line (since u've switched to past tense) should've been 'I *would* find her son' instead of "I *will* find her son". but that's all i noticed ^_^ and it's no biggie, either. just pointing it out :) I like Mrs. Hawkins, she sounds nice. and really sad :( of course, i would be too...oh, just noticed another thing! "I whispered as we *approach the house. again, wrong tense :) oh well! anywho, good chapter ^_^

^_^ yay, she didn't think Felicity was insane! Dang, I would NEVER be able to call somebody i didn't know, even if i didn't sound like a lunatic. HOORAY FOR KNOWING WHO THE CREEPY OLD GUY IS! now, to find Johnny! Simon's such a good boyfiend :) and Shelly's such an awesome best friend! ^_^ get the next chapter up quick! ttyl!