I agree with you on the subject that this chapter makes Ingrid seem a lot more relatable. I liked how realistic you portrayed the family. For once, the mother isn't ignorant or stupid, which was very refreshing to see.

And, of course, Bree is awesome. I also liked the way Bree brings out a softer side of Ingrid; it shows she's a much more complex character than first appears.

I only have one problem: Why doesn't this story have more reviews?

This is perhaps one of my favorite chapters. Love it! :)

:O! I have loved this story so far but this chapter...this chapter... I LOVE IT! Very very entertaining. I was giddy the whole time I read it. I can't wait to see what happens next!

ok there's one thing you might want to change. In Chap 1 you said it was Monday and then in chap 3 you said the next day was Saturday... so yea just letting ya know because I would want to know that if it was my story.

"Why would she be in a bush in the first place?" I absolutely love when Nomi says this line XDD Because I'm the kind of person who would just sit in a bush and do nothing XD

Oh my gosh I am just starting this story and I already love it! _ MUST READ ON!

amazing! amazing! amazing! amazing! I love this story it is so good! please write more soon!

oh!

i like it! no. i seriously love it! -looks in awe- that was so cool!

I love this story. Really.

I love how there's an abundance of sarcasm (my favorite language).

It kind of irks me, though, that there isn't any punctuation or spelling I can correct. My grammar brain is kind of disappointed that it can't correct anything.

Anyways... great work, I'm "favorite"ing (would the gerund of that be "favoriting"?) and now I'm going on to Chapter 3.

Awesomeness! D Write more, I can't wait to read the rest!

This is so good.

The story's well written, it makes you want to read more, it actually has punctuation...

The list goes on and on.

Hello there. Its been a long time since I've last review. My academic work, along with my personal life were the culminating factors towards this.

I was so busy throughout the course of last year, as well as parts of this year, that it was mind numbing. With that said, I've definitely had to reread a couple of chapters, and I've gotten caught up.

But enough of my rambling allow me to get onto the review. First off, you definitely pulled off an extraordinary twist.

I'd always wondered where the serum came from, and now its been revealed.

Great job on that. Secondly Ingrid's escape was also phenomenal. I loved how you made her assault Doctor Darin, before actually bolting out of the door.

He deserved every bit of what had coming and thus, he should know better.

Well Done. Plus, Jade and friend's rescue attempt is also great, and there's some excellent action that accompanies this.

All in all, this story is getting great, and I definitely cannot wait for the next chapter.

P.S: Do you mind if you take a look at my work once more. I know this might be hard to ask, but I would really appreciate it if you did so.

you suck. why? because this is one of the few stories i'm reading that hasn't been finished. and i hate suspense. and waiting.

lol thoughts on the actual chapter: i wish ichigo would just crack and say she's sick. surely that's an additional motive to her not wanting to go back. perhaps you could've reminded us around then, rather than leave it to reader. i don't know. your call?

and bloody hell, get jade on some one-on-one counselling w dr. charles. and why can't nomi realise they share a common goal? getting out. jackass.

*thought, then lightbulb.* if you got edmund to say something to that effect and call him a jackass if and/or when they meet up, you would be amazing... or it could be someone else entirely.

Hello again, I apologize once more for not reviewing on a chapter by chapter basis. I will make an effort to do so, but I highly doubt I'll be able to.

With that said, I shall go onto the review. So far this story has been quite intriguing. The twists and turns that you've pulled are quite spectacular.

For instance, I loved how you made Jade struggle with coping with the loss of a loved one, even though this person didn't display the same feelings.

The story has definitely taken a twist,now that Ingrid has been discovered. I wonder what's going to happen to her? Hopefully she'll be able to escape and see her family.

All in all, great chapter and I'll definitely be reading on.

Hello there, new reviewer. First off I do apologize for not reviewing sooner, for its really not my style. With that said, I shall definitely strive to review more often.

I do have to say, I'm definitely impressed with your story so far. In terms of writing, its very well written, for it has great pacing and flow.

Though, I did spot some grammatical errors,but overall they didn't really detract from anything. The characterization of Ingrid was spot on. I liked how you characterized her as a negative person.

It adds a new dimension, for its generally a very realistic mindset among many people. I also liked how you presented a sense of mystery throughout the entire story.

This most prominently was apparent in your representations of Nomi and everyone who works for the mysterious organization. I did feel bad for Ingrid however, when Harper was killed.

It was bad enough that she was kidnapped, but she ultimately lost her friend in the process. On the bright side however, she's already somewhat made friends Jade.

I am curious to see what exactly is the Labyrinth and how Ingrid is going to fair. Overall, this is great story and thus, I can't wait to read on.

hmm a few grammatical errors but pretty gripping :)

Struck, not stroke. But other than that, another quality chapter.