i liked this one shot a lot. It was different than the normal cliches due to the plot of it. I kinda wish you could extend it a bit but that's okay. Anyhow, I'll check out some of your other stories =)

-kay gee

WOW. is all i can say.
I didn't see that coming at all, which is a massive compliment to you. Is written emotionally, and i can see them together on the roof. (that was my fave bit :P) but yeah, definitely keep writing this story! I cant wait to see what happens :)