Great writing I have a question.

What does the Joker card do?

Anyway, great writng, I am super hero, and science fiction fan. Keep up the great writing.

Wow... I mean, I've read some good superstories, but WOW...

Not bad at all, sir. Not bad at all.

I seriously like this.

I don't know what else to say... keep it coming!

The linearity of time gets kinda confusing. >

'I’m not entirely sure where to put it as there’s no comic book/superhero genre (which I really wish there was because it would kind of be cool to read other people’s comic book universes outside of Marvel and DC); I just hope I’m putting it in the right place!'
Seconded. The superhero/comic genre seems to be a subgenre of sci-fi so a lot of people stick their superhero/comic stories here. I did the same thing. And I definitely agree its own section would pwn.

The code names keep making me think of other characters (Scarlet Witch, Gambit, Captain America), lol.

Will the 'how'd Bartholomew get to Raan?' question be answered later on or was that thrown in there just so Ro-wan would know about Earth? Cause it's a good explanation for why he knows but does make you curious about Bartholomew's past.

Anyways, this is a nice start. Definitely has me interested. You've got yourself a reader. :D