I like this a lot!! But, eh, I don't get it. It's probably because you already established the characters in a story I haven't read yet... right? I think that was what your a/n stated.

Oh, brilliant descriptions. I especially loved the 'Bella Swan' reference, although I cringed slightly at the mention of Twilight in this. It's much too good for that sort of thing.

All in all, phenomenal story. Emerson is just a doll.

I didn't actually read it - again - or anything, but it's still brilliant. I love them.
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Is this where it ends?

I'm afraid it has to be, because it's a perfect ending if it is.

But oh poor Emerson! I'd love to see him happy eventually . . .

Nice. It wasn't amazing, but it was good and interesting. You gave a small glimpse into characters that maybe you could have expanded on, but the way they are presented here are fine for a one-shot.

I also wanted to say that the description of Emerson checking out Hugh's back and looking for "wings" was really cool.