Oh god, I love this. You are amazing ;-;
asdjhk I'm trying to explain why I like this so much, you know, the descriptions, way you phrase everything, the pace of the story how it's so nicely done, but aha, I'd be listing everything.

I like this one! But in Cold Iron, Jedrah is blond.

Wow.

The kids are mysterious and complete at the same time. The wizard will probably be after him again, but Jedrah is a smart kid. The clock might take some fixing. I doubt the enemy is simply going to pack up and go home now that the plot is foiled, but I chose to believe they will eventually.

It's very nice.

Good to see this character again. I kind of miss Cold Iron.

Anyway, please keep up the good work. :)

This story rocks. I always love the crazy/off kilter characters, and you pulled him off perfectly. I didn't get the last couple lines, but I love the story anyways. Keep up the good work.

Wow. I don't think I've read a piece of prose as elegantly eerie and beautiful as that since Frankenstein, which is entirely complimentary by the way. I was mesmerised all the way through, it's almost impossibly brilliant
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