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jolephoto 2009-08-01 . chapter 20
I love you.
Zoey McCusker 2009-03-07 . chapter 15
Omw! Keep writing! I read these all all the way through and couldn't stop. Update! :)
Zoey
Zoey McCusker 2009-03-07 . chapter 5
Ok, i tried to follow this, i really did, but... you have a tendency to overuse pronouns. We need names to help understand the motivations and who's doing what. Make sense?
Zoey
Zoey McCusker 2009-03-07 . chapter 1
I don't hate you! lol, but yes, cute story. I love how you just wrote down all these moments. I should do that... anyways, i'm off to read more.
Moselle S 2009-02-26 . chapter 13
Aww Annie this is so awesome and so true :D We have to do this more often it was so much fun!
Moselle S 2009-01-13 . chapter 10
This is really nice I can't believe you actually don't think you'll do well on your english test I mean psh you'll ace it
jole 2009-01-09 . chapter 9
:-)

should be "get used to it" not "get used it" hun :D

lol lovely. i miss this.
Moselle S 2009-01-01 . chapter 8
It really shows your talent when you can right not only the cute romantic stories but also these real life, angst as you like to say :P stories, and both are equaly amazing. Even if it's a sad story, you still write it beautifuly :)
And aww ya poor Megan and I must say you missed the majority of the bewilderment as you were in my arms and could not see. Cause no one knew what was going on, at all :P
Moselle S 2008-12-30 . chapter 6
Haha I like how there aren't really names used, but it's still really good. It's nice when you can find a little piece of a fairy tale in real live, like a knight in shinning armor :D Or maybe just a t-shirt and jeans :P
Moselle S 2008-12-29 . chapter 5
This is really beautiful Annie, I love it
Moselle S 2008-12-20 . chapter 2
Once again, so few words, so much said, like really, ALOT said.
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WithoutException 2008-12-19 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. :)
Moselle S 2008-12-19 . chapter 1
Who could hate you annie?
Hmm a bit of deja vous aka halloween lol.
I like it though, it's amazing how much you can convey in so little words :D
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