You have depicted confusion relly well, yeah, sometimes I do wonder whether I have been role-playing or not.

I love the rhyme and flow of this. My favorite line is a perfect summary of the entire piece, "after all these years I still haven't found my place". Well done.

dude! I loved it! (really cool, seriously!) Keep on writing!

"But what of Friday?
dressed all in black
a narcissist’s smile
and dark wings upon my back"
My favorite part
but it was all extraordinary.