Well, the majority of the story was intense and kind of interesting. Everything was very well described. Heh, it's kind of sad, not to be able to find out what happens to the rest of the group, but the ending was great. You get to wonder about what happened to the rest of the group, which I'm guessing were all characters in the horror movie, and sometimes having to imagine what happened is good, and the ending also made me laugh. :] I DID like it!

- giant squid.

A really well written piece, the ending took me completely by surprise. I would suggest tightening up the story a little. Examples would be cutting “around a spirit board” and just say “around an Ouija Board to contact the spirits of the dead.” Also cut “they knew nothing would.” just leave it as “nothing would happen.” Apart from that it was really well done. Keep Writing.

Bwa~, I was shaking the whole time. The ending made me raise an eyebrow and giggle, though. A fun read, all in all...I loved it. ^^

~Sunny

That's awesome. I like how you made it seem like Amanda was part of the drunk group when she really wasn't. Fooled me.
I like this one. Very well done.

Impressive! Very impressive! You've an affinity for details. I hope you got a good grade for this in your English class.

-Captain Dark