I like your old songs, they're so good! I loved the lines:

"'cuz you twisted and confused me,

You broke and then refused me."

Awesome song!

I love your songwriting abilities - every attempt I try to make is a complete and utter fail. The only objection I have is the word "'cus". Though I really have no regard to spelling incorrectness, I just wanted to bring that out since I usually see it spelled as ''cus". If I presume correctly, it is spelled that way on purpose and I am just trudging on land not to be trudged on.

another good one...great job.

just so you no

apology plural

is apologies

:)