"Oh it burns my heart

So I try to replace it.

But I'll never try to forget"

Were the best lines! Yay!

I liked the choice of words in this one a lot :D

i really liked your choice of words. great job!

I really like the way this is written, and it seemed very honest. I like it.

Peace, Daze

wow. I liked it. It feels like it was straight from the heart.

I like it a lot, especially this part:

"I replace it with a fake smile,

And some days it lasts awhile"

Keep writing!