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Reviews For: Forget Love Potions, Pudding's Where It's At
StoicCrying 2009-01-21 . chapter 1
aww. i absolutely love it!!
CrimsonLilly 2009-01-10 . chapter 1
Don't change a thing! And definitely not the ending!!
Its perfect the way it is-witty and leaving a lot to our own imagination. I love your uke-guys. They're all so absorbed in themselves that just their thought process makes me snicker and laugh like crazy...
Like this one:

"Stupid mirror, I don’t take the chance to ignore you and this is what I get in return? A mess that is barely reminiscent of the gorgeousness that is truly me?"
But this one was even better:

“Charlie! I know how much you would like to masturbate to pictures of your own self but for goodness sake, will you at least answer me?!”

I nearly died laughing ;)

I just figured I'd check out if you've done anything new,so I was really pleasantly surprised to see this cutesy one-shot :)
Good job! XD
Kneecap 2009-01-09 . chapter 1
xD!!

Well that was...different! I liked the squabbling over the pudding xD, BUT IN THE END, HE STILL PAID FOR THE CUSTARD, and that's what really matters.

Of course.
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