|Reviews for Mortava|
| Jessie My Love 12/29/08 . chapter 2
I like this story so far. This chapter helped clear up some things for me. The characters are good, however I do feel that you describe them more in depth. They do have their distinct personalities but they still don't seem extremely real to me. But I'm sure with more description that could be fixed. So yea, good job. :]
-Jessie m p.s. returning reviews is always nice
| Jessie My Love 12/29/08 . chapter 1
This chapter kind of confused me. I liked the idea behind the story, but I don't get exactly what is going on in this chapter. You should make sure to be a bit more clear.
I do really like the idea of this story though. I'm going to go ahead and read the next chapter
| murazrai 12/29/08 . chapter 2
Hmm...getting lost in the alternate world...quite a good idea. The surrounding details are quite good. This story intrigues me. I'll read more when you update.
| Aleksy The Flying Onion 12/21/08 . chapter 1
Oh man! I wish I was her!
This sound very promising! I like the main character already. Wake up in a strange place and just kind of sit back and enjoy it lol. NEXT TO A HOT MAN NO LESS!
Please continue! I have many questions now!