   Edara 2009-11-17 . chapter 14I love the series so far! Both are fabulous novels!
One thing that I found a bit confusing was in the first novel you said that Leonard's pack was in London, but in the second you completely changed that and said his pack was in Cologne.
It was a bit distracting having to reoreantate myself.
Other than that, I think you have wonderful writing skills! I really get to know the personality of Elaine and those around her.
I can't wait to find out more! (I also really want Elaine to get with Michael!)
THANKS |
 AndItMovesUsAll 2009-11-05 . chapter 14Ohmygod, i cant believe i forgot to put this on my alerts list, i thought i had and was under the immpression it was on hiatus! And what a place to end it, i need to know what happens next! Last time i read i only got up to the YA meeting, but i love the new developments and i think youve really developed Elaine well in this story: the difference in her thoughts and actions is noticeable, although im mourning the fact that shes grown up a lot quickly, when Cassiel hasnt, because this will surely keep them apart a little bit, and i liked how they were were on the same level and could relate to eachother. I love the way her and Michaels relationship has progressed, although i profess that i want to see more of them together and for them to finally talk a bit, but i understand that hasnt really been possible considering the situation and Elaines reluctance.
I cant believe Dorethea is Catalina! I suppose i should have seen it, but i dont like it really, or rather i dont like her, because she met Elaine and she probably knew what he would try to do to her, but she didnt warn her or anything. And though i can understand why Elaine felt happy and close to Dorothea because of her personality, i still dont like her that much. The thing is, i dont really understand how dorothea can still be that open and talkative, when shes meant to be extremely old, i wouldve have thought she'd be much more serious like the other wolves who are old.
Also, i know this is a bit late, but in the first book, at the beggining, Elaine kneels before alex because she says thats how they greet the alpha, but she has never done it again?
But i loved this, even all the stuff with odolf, the whole plot was great! I just really want to know what the deal is with whos shes promised to, because i assume its michael but then theres all the stuff with Gabriel, so its confusing, so it will be amazing when we finally find out all the details. I cant remeber, but is there going to be a third book? |
 ancientchives 2009-10-18 . chapter 8 haha I just reread canislupis and hellhounds too! I just wanted to say that I actually didn't really like the chapter with the young alphas meeting...I dunno, it just felt like a teenagers saving the world kind of plot that I can't stand but the chapter after that really amped it up again. And I know that elaine is only 17 so this would really sort of be a teenagers/hero thing..but yea I just can't really explain why I didn't particularly like the young alphas meeting too much. Anyways, hope you are not offended with my opinion!- I am not trying to bash your story in any way! In fact, this is one of the best supernatural stories I have ever read. I just wanted to give some feedback other than looking forward to another update! |
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