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frogs of war 2009-11-07 . chapter 5
It's nice that he found a purpose, but I think he's more than a stuffed animal to them.
Loveless Breath 2009-09-07 . chapter 4
Aw...I love the ending. I guess that answered my question, didnt it?
Loveless Breath 2009-09-07 . chapter 2
Oh wow. I really like this. Is it completed or are you still working on it?
frogs of war 2009-06-25 . chapter 4
The was so sweet and answered all my questions. Thank you.
2009-06-25 . chapter 3
Where does Eddie come in? I reread the two other chapters so I could remember who everyone was and I see Scott and the twins, but not Eddie.

Boy, that woman is pushy. Mason should buy them matching rings or something.

John won't kiss him in front of the kids? Shame on him. Showing affection to your partner in front of your children is a basic duty of parenthood to show kids that they aren't the center of your world and what a good relationship looks like when they go out to find their own. But I'm not sure my kids see it the same way.
frogs of war 2008-12-26 . chapter 2
So cute.
CharismaticOutCry 2008-12-25 . chapter 2
Hello!

I wasn't expecting a second chapter for this!

And I really think that 'Cute' was the last thing on Mason's mind at that point in mind. Lol.

Enjoyable all the same!
CharismaticOutCry 2008-12-24 . chapter 1
Hello!

I see you've joined the Freak-Of-Spade challenge. I would myself but I've never been very good at writing when given guidelines.

I liked it! Different from the other entries I've read so far! I like the breaking free aspect of it, and that the mother was abusive for once, it's always the poor old father who is abusive.

And I'm glad no one died, though I haven't yet read one where someone did, it's not one of the rules is it? I don't think so... Anyway!

Good job!
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