this is intense, i love it. ur certainly not holding back on the angst. alex and addi are cool characters. the only thing i think cudve been done better was the parents day scene with addi's mom. it just seemed a bit rushed and maybe cudv been prolonged a bit to make her seem more evil. other than that, great story. very emotive. ;)

So this is so intense, it is good, it is emotional and rough, but in a good way, Melissa is so evil, but she has issues as well so it is understanable, I love Alex and Adi, they can help eachother and that is perfect. I think you should post your story, it be nice to read.

That is so depressing. Sad thing is, I can see my mom doing that to me. She almost sent me to an institution once. But we couldn't afford it.

I LOVE the story, though. Keep up the fantastic job!

Aw, I wanted to read more then I came to the author's note. I really like this story it's sad and there are people who have to deal with this and everyone thinks they have it bad but there are always people who have had tragic moments that they can't escape from. I feel so bad and I want to read more, the mom is a total ** (sorry bout language) I want to read more I hope the mother never comes back in this if so I would want her to be the one raped and crap then she'd believe her daughter. Geeze I hope you can write the next chapter for this soon, it's really good and I know you have other stories and a life like most people. Hope to see an update within the year

This is good. You should write the one from ur class

Don't tell me she got raped T_T

This story, surely is different.

Thanks for writing!

It almost made me cry, the therapy part, my therapy never makes me cry all I do there is mock the popular girls at school...bad connection, but it did! I felt that horrid horrid lump in my throat and the scowl, and poor Alex. But I am very glad he told her

Damn I can't believe her mom did that and said all those things.

Aw he loves her =)

I hate Melissa and Zack...I'm surprised they don't get in trouble for doing what they're doing lol

Hey Addison's making progress! I'm glad she finally told Travis =)


Sorry about not reviewing...

This story so far is great!

I LOVE THIS STORY! =D =D =D

Loved the chapter!...although Melissa didn't even have to go down that road,but she did. And that's the reason I don't like her.

I love this!!
Keep going!!
It's awesome!!
No prob ;)
I'm so excited because 2morro im going to a P!nk concert wit one of my best friends.
It's gonna b fun:DD

I really like this story! I'm totally in love with Ashley, she's such a sweetie. =)

very sweet.

Yayy, an update! I know she cant, but i Really wish she could tell Alex!~Hopefully when she tells him, he will understand (hint hint)
anywyas, plz update soon!~So Good :D