Interesting. The ending sounds like there's going to be a sequel or some sort. The bad guys can never leave Caleb peacefully alone, huh? Great job on this story.

Is Ling really dead or was that Caleb's imagination? Great suspense over there. Loved the scene between Cecil, Milt and Nickel.

Yikes, they walked into a trap, but thank goodness for GPS, huh? Interesting, I've never heard of Varma Kalai. It sounded like Tamil language, so I guess it's some kind of Indian defensive arts or something. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.

OMG, you're back! And with a new story too. I'm loving this one already. You always come up with an interesting plot. And there's always someone who wants Caleb dead, huh? Can't wait to see how this turns out.