 Ana FFN 2009-10-11 . chapter 1This is a really nice fic :D
(well, I didnt like the cyber though 'shudders')
BUT THE STORY WAS REALLY NICE
I hope you make a sequel (YOU HAVE TO)
and about the ending part
the whole MySPace thing
(did he get angry because of his experiment or because NOW he asks him ) |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-08-10 . chapter 29YAY! I've managed to figure the ending out! It's kinda ironic, isn't it? I think that my favorite bit in this story is Webb's speech in Chapter 28. Yeah, our personalities are too complicated to be understood. |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-08-10 . chapter 27Most confessions are sugary and cheesy, but "Lina's" last message to Luke isn't. Well done! |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-08-10 . chapter 19Eh, thanks for posting a warning at the beginning of this chapter. Frankly speaking, Jaden is a pathetic pervert. |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-08-09 . chapter 161) Luke has remembered Cody's birthday after all, so sweet. :)
2) I've never expected Cody to cry, but well, it's a nice ending for this chapter. |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-08-09 . chapter 13I love Nessa for being so sensible. I agree with her that Cody has made a big bad mistake. |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-08-09 . chapter 8Oh gosh, I realize that I do share similiarities with Josh Dankosky, and he's a guy! Gosh!
1) I'm so introverted that some people describe me as "anti-social".
2) I wear dark, saggy clothes. I've always vowed to give myself a makeover, yet I'm too lazy to shop downtown. Plus, I don't even have enough money. :(
3) I'd tried googling myself before, but I didn't find anything. Am I some Mystery Girl?
Lolz, I predict that some exceptionally smart guy will figure out that Carolina=Cody. I'm looking forward to this. |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-08-09 . chapter 6:(--"Americas Next Top Model" or "America's Next Top Model"? Um, I guess that it's a typo. |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-08-09 . chapter 5Oh dear, this terrific chapter has put some really bizzare thoughts into my head. For example, I've been wondering whether I should create a fake Facebook profile, just to befriend some childhood "enemies". I think that Carolina sounds old-fashioned but nice. |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-08-09 . chapter 3Hihi! This chapter reminds me of all my personal experiences. Like, I joined Friendster because of an ex-classmate's invition, but I abandoned my account soon afterwards. Even now, I'm terribly shy in real life, so I'm too shy to join Facebook. Plus, I envy those people who post their photos online. I mean, if you aren't confident that you look good, I doubt that you'll be posting your photos online. Haha, and sorry for ranting. |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-08-09 . chapter 2If Cody is a power-hungry nut who delights in manipulating others, then I'll hate him to the core. However, if Cody has sweet personality traits hidden somewhere, then I might like him. By the way, what has inspired you to write "iCrush"? I'm asking this because your concept seems very interesting, like a whiff of fresh air. |
 Wolf bathed in Star-light 2009-07-09 . chapter 29wow
*applauds* |
 xSadistxFujix 2009-05-08 . chapter 29The ending was awsome. I found it really funny though I was hoping for a kiss. -pouts- I guess they just didn't get that far in their relationship. This was cute. And you do not have the reviews for this story that it deserves, seriously. And I REALLY can't wait for "I Wanna Be a Porn Star" that sounds awsome and the title really sounds like the song "I Wanna Be a Cowboy" (if you picked up on what that title meant, and sorry for that USELESS peice of informatin, its a song on Queer as Folk--gotta love Brian and Justin--and I just couldn't help putting that there because I just LOVE to ramble!) So Favorite! |
 frolic-horror 2009-04-28 . chapter 29Great story! I liked it very very much. The "zucchini" incident had me laughing like crazy. The ending was funny, too, though I'm a bit disappointed that we didn't get to see any "real interaction" between the guys :( On the other hand I don't read stories just for the smut, so it didn't bother me that much :P
*kisses your feet* |
 Selika 2009-04-24 . chapter 25Haha, yeah, because the minorities! Always having babies and getting stuff for free! Affirmative action is such a crock, huh?
In all seriousness, I was pretty taken aback by that paragraph, especially since the issues raised are ridiculously complex and the summation that Cody gives is inaccurate and misinformed, and makes him seem fairly ignorant. I can't tell if the reader is supposed to question his broad statement or merely accept it, but I'm leaning towards the latter, which makes me pretty uncomfortable.
I've enjoyed this story so far, for the most part (there are a couple of other things about it that I question, but I'm not going to go into them now) but that really threw me, and frankly, it reduced my enjoyment a fair amount. |