Wow, I love your way of writing, its so distinct. Again very relatable, people you've never talked to in school come and badger you on the last...its so annoying and yet so remiscent.

To be very corny, you have a wonderful way with words! :D

O.O

Aye-mayizing. Just like the Window Watchers. I like how you create characters without explicitly having characters--it's more of a connection between the reader and what's happening, and I can't explain it. I like your use of point of view.

Your stories are so creative. :) I love this part:

** you, **, glad you’re out of my life now. Unsaid.

Best of luck to a very sweet girl. Written.

That is so true. We must choose our words carefully. Ha ha, this did bring back memories, and I'm not even out of high school yet! :D Love it. As usual. Whoo!

Is it wrong that this had me laughing until I thought I was going to pull a muscle? I loved it! The unsaid thoughts were oh-so-true, and I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who would even think of thinking something like that!

I also liked the poetic flow of this story, as well as the passage of time. It all just flowed (I said that word already, didn't I? Oh well!) very nicely! Great job!

[Culminating in a thumb-blurred photograph taken a shaking hand]
You're missing a 'by' before 'a.'

An interesting concept, I like it. The amusing parts in italics kept the reader entertained. Good job.

Oh man, I absolutely loved this. The first 12 lines made me split my sides laughing and then the last bit made me sigh.

Definitely true. All of it. And very beautifully written. I really enjoy how easy it is to read your work. You are very good at weaving words down the page in an unending seam...like our very thoughts. This will be a favorite of mine. Please write more soon!

- Aranel

ps. Thank you for the review on The Sea Nymph and the Warrior :)