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Reviews For: Pinocchio's Got Nothing On Me
janie 2008-12-22 . chapter 1
You should continue with this and maybe make the chapters longer.
But it is really good
octopus pie 2008-12-22 . chapter 1
Definitely continue it. You've got a good start here and what seems like an interesting take on vampires since it seems like your character is just turning into one. Write another chapter and see what you think about it.
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