I think the parking garage idea is really cool, and it's pretty awesome to see all the paralells between a car and a person. Your teacher makes good assignments. :)

This is awesome. In fact I'm favouriting it. It made me laugh, and it made me contemplate. The metaphors are funny and still quite apt and somewhat depressing. This is an almost painful description of adolescence, identity and the high school environment that I at one point could entirely relate. Awesome dark comedy, very very well done!! :):)